(Blogger’s Note: I was rereading
Asimov’s The Early Asimov, in which
he reprinted many of his earliest stories. It is interesting to see the
evolution of his style. Read one of the first of those stories and then one of
the last for comparison. Asimov said that he didn’t change those early stories,
other than a spelling correction and the like. I thought I would reprint some
of my earliest stories in a similar fashion, which is not to say that I believe
I’m in the same league as Asimov. Hell, I’m not even on the same planet…
however, as I started to retype the story into the computer (because it was
originally written on a typewriter which dates it somewhat but it was written
in the mid-1970s which dates me somewhat) I just couldn’t do it. The story needed
work, so I rewrote it as well. For example, in the original story, the scene
with the two pilots was two paragraphs. I expanded it because I wanted to show
what was happening rather than telling what had happened. Anyway, here is the
new and improved story… and note the use of our technology in it. None of that
was in the original, otherwise this tale would have been an incredible piece of
prediction.)
The Unidentified
Factor
The
ringing telephone woke him. He swore at another middle of the night calls that
were becoming all too routine. At least twice a week and lately it seemed to be
three or four times, Captain Philip Wilson was called at home. That was the
disadvantage or being on twenty-four hour, seven days a week, call, not to
mention being the unit commander.
Wilson
rolled over, reached for the land line which was more secure than his cell, and
knocked the receiver off the hook. He groped for it, found it, and said,
“Yeah?”
“This
is Sergeant Burroughs, sir. I have an ‘operational immediate’. It came in about
five minutes ago.”
Wilson
sat up and reached for the light. “Can you give me any of the details?”
Burroughs
hesitated and then said, “Not really sir. It involves a couple of our pilots.”
“All
right.” Wilson looked at the alarm clock and said, “I should be there inside of
fifteen minutes. Twenty at the most. Let’s say about zero four three zero.”
Having
said all that he cared to say, Wilson hung up. For a moment he sat staring at
the phone, and then scrubbed his face with the heels of his hands. Again he
glanced at the clock as if he couldn’t believe the time and then forced himself
to stand up.
Quickly
he shaved, brushed his teeth and combed his hair. Since he could see no reason
for others to stay in bed if he had to get awake, he called his executive
officer, Lieutenant Frank Lanning.
When
the phone was answered, he said, “Frank. We have an ‘operational immediate.’
I’ll meet you at the base.” He didn’t bother to identify himself. Lanning would
know who it was.
There
was a brief reply which might have been a mumbled oath. Wilson hung up without
waiting for more. He walked around the bed, and pulled a uniform from the
closet. He looked at the wings reflecting the dim bedroom light and wondered
why he had given up his flying assignment. Had he stayed in the cockpit he
wouldn’t be awake at four in the morning because some citizen or a couple of
pilots had seen a light in the night sky.
At
the base, he went directly to his office. Burroughs was waiting with both the
report and the coffee. As Wilson entered, Burroughs said, “Good morning, sir.”
Wilson
took the report, then looked at the coffee and frowned. “Can you scare up a
Coke instead? I think I need something cold.” With that, Wilson, reading the
first page, walked into his office.
The
report was actually based on incidents from three locations, funneled to his
office through a larger intelligence network at the next higher headquarters.
It seemed that a dozen people, including two Air Force pilots and an amateur
astronomer had seen a bright point of light cross the sky sometime between 0215
and 0251.
Wilson
rocked back in his chair and swore. “Why can’t these yo-yos see the damned
lights at a decent hour?”
He
flipped to the next page and saw that the sightings had been made in three
cities located some 517 miles apart and on a straight line. The estimated
altitude was something like 185 miles and the speed just over 17,000 miles an
hour which made it sound like it was something in orbit, though Wilson didn’t
believe the altitude estimate and if that was off, then the speed was off,
unless they had some kind of radar confirmation.
Burroughs
entered with the Coke. Wilson looked up and then, waving the report like a
banner, asked, “Did you read this?”
“Yes,
sir.”
“Did
you find anything special in it? Was one of those pilots a general or
something?”
“Not
that I know of.” Burroughs set the Coke bottles down and found himself a chair.
That was a breach of military protocol but it was four in the morning and
sometimes at that hour there was no good reason for protocol.
“As
near as I can figure,” said Burroughs, “someone was impressed with the straight
line and the multitude of witnesses, given the hour and the altitude.”
“So
what?” Wilson picked up the Coke. “We can’t do anything about it until morning.”
He stopped talking when the outer door opened. He yelled, “That you Frank?”
“Right.”
Lanning stepped into the office, his black hair uncombed and his blue eyes
blood shot. “What’s the great catastrophe this time?”
“You’ll
love this.” Wilson slid a few pages across to Lanning and into the pool of
light formed by the desk lamp. He looked at Lanning and said, “Flip on the
overhead.”
Lanning
read the first few lines, looked up and asked, “What are we supposed to do
about this?”
“Don’t
stop now or you’ll miss the best part. The altitude.”
“Oh,
hell,” said Lanning. He tossed the pages at the desk but missed. They fluttered
to the floor.
Wilson
took a long pull at his Coke and then set the bottle on the desk. “I supposed
they’ll want us on the scene as the sun comes up.”
“We
could have started just as easily started at seven,” said Lanning. He flopped
into the overstuffed chair set in one corner of the office, put one leg up on
the arm and leaned back.
“Okay,”
said Wilson. “Burroughs, make the arrangements for us to travel. We’ll want to
talk to the pilots first. Frank, let’s you and me go catch a shower and shave.
Meet you here,” Wilson looked at his watch, “at, say, zero six three zero.”
“Got
it,” said Lanning.
Wilson
finished his Coke and gave the bottle to Burroughs to recycle. He stood up and
headed to the door.
The
pilots, sitting in a small conference room, were a little annoyed at still
being at the base. They had wanted to go home when they finished the paperwork
after the flight but had been told to wait until relieved. One of them, a tall,
thin man, was reading the newspaper and the other; a short, slender brunette
held her tablet on her lap and was playing a game. She didn’t bother to look up
when Wilson entered.
The
pilot with the newspaper saw that he outranked everyone in the room, and went
back to the newspaper. The other didn’t even bother to look up.
Wilson
said, “Good morning. I have a few questions.”
The
pilot with the newspaper folded it, and set it on the table. He didn’t bother
to introduce himself. He just stared at Wilson.
“We
filled out your form. We’ve been up all night and we’d really just rather go on
home. I’m sorry that I mentioned anything.” He pushed a document toward Wilson.
Wilson
ignored it and said, “It would be helpful, Major, if you would tell us what you
saw.”
Without
preamble, he said, “We were flying a loose formation, picking up a little
nighttime to stay current. Emily spotted the object, the light, whatever, that
looked like a very bright star. It appeared to be moving in relation to the
background stars so we thought it would be fun to give chase. We started a
climb, trying to get above the light but we couldn’t seem to close on it. It
just stayed ahead of us and disappeared about two minutes after we began the chase.”
Wilson
turned his attention to Emily, who was a captain and whose last name was Ryder,
according to her nametag. He asked, “What drew your attention to it?”
She
turned off her tablet and said, “I just looked and there was the bright light.
Looked like a star but it brighter than anything I have ever seen, including
Venus. I called Major Johnson’s attention to it and he spotted it right away.”
Since
both pilots had seen it, it was clear that the object had not been a reflection
on the canopy of one of the fighters. It was in sight too long to be a meteor
and it seemed to react to the fighters. Both said they were impressed with the
speed because the object was so far above them.
“We
checked with flight following,” said Johnson, “but they had nothing on radar.
No one seemed to have radar contact. We couldn’t find anyone else who saw it.”
“Why’d
you report this?” asked Wilson.
Johnson
took a deep breath. “Had it been up to me, we wouldn’t have said anything, but
we’d queried the radar facility and they had monitored the call in the command
post. The intell officer was waiting for us, per regulations. At that point we
had no choice.”
They
talked to the pilots for another thirty minutes, but learned nothing that would
help them identify the object. Neither of them had any idea about what it might
have been. With nothing to go on, with only a single bright light in the sky,
devoid of detail, there was nothing more to be done.
Wilson
gathered up the reports and stood up. He said, “Thanks for the help. Sorry to
have held you up.”
Johnson
smiled quickly and said, “Not your fault. It was mine. I shouldn’t have asked
for the radar confirmation.
As
they left, Wilson said, “I think we need to talk to that astronomer.”
“Amateur
astronomer,” said Lanning.
“Amateur,”
agreed Wilson. Then he said, “You go get us a car from the motor pool, and I’ll
see what the Intel officer has to say.”
Lanning
picked up Wilson thirty minutes later, outside of the Intel office. As he got
into the car, he said, “Well, that was a colossal waste of time. He didn’t even
talk to the pilots. He just gave the pilots the forms to fill out and then set
them off to wait for us.”
Lanning
said, “I just don’t understand why someone is so on fire to get an answer on
this. It’s not like these things haven’t been seen before.”
“What
bugs me,” said Wilson, “is why they would slap an operational immediate on
this. No one seems to know why or who.” He took off his hat and rubbed his
head.
“I
thought our headquarters did that.”
“Nope.
I checked. They received it that way.” Wilson paused and looked out the car
window. They were passing a number of brick buildings that had somehow missed
looking institutional. Maybe it was because they were single story and had bright
white trim.
“If
I didn’t know better,” Wilson continued, “I’d think this was being driven by
Air Force Headquarters. There is something here that has then concerned.”
Lanning
slowed for a red light but it changed and he accelerated. “That doesn’t explain
what is so important about this case. It’s just a light in the sky for crying
out loud. We got a hundred… hell, a thousand like it.”
Wilson
shrugged. “Beats me.”
The
astronomer was quick to tell them all the things that the light was not. He had
a much better time reference, and he had a precise length of his sighting. None
of the other witnessed added much to the case file. They had seen a light. It
had crossed the sky rapidly. It looked like a satellite only bigger. No one had
taken a picture, though one had tried using her smart phone. There was nothing
more for them to do but return to their home station.
Back
in the office, Wilson decided to review the notes, reports and other documents.
He spread the papers over his desk and then turned on the computer to begin a
spreadsheet. As he entered the data, he turned to Lanning who was sitting in
the overstuffed chair, sipping water and staring into space. He said, “Here’s
something interesting.”
“What?”
“One
of the times is off by ninety minutes.”
Lanning
stood and walked over to look at the monitor screen. “Probably means that
someone can’t tell time.”
Wilson
rocked back, his eyes on the screen and took a sip of his Coke. “At the second
location?”
“Okay,
then the thing took ninety minutes to get from ‘A’ to ‘B’.”
Wilson
shook his head. “I don’t think you’ve got the point. We have three sightings in
one location. Two fit nicely but the third is ninety minutes off. Allowing for
differences in clocks and time estimates by the witnesses, they should all be
very close.”
“Then
you’re right. Someone can’t tell time.”
Wilson
picked up the hard copy and handed it to Lanning. “You read this and then tell
me that.”
For
the first time since they had returned, Wilson visibly relaxed. He stretched,
and stared at the Coke bottle. He suddenly had an idea and sat up. “Hey,
Burroughs. Come in here for a minute.”
Burroughs
stuck his head in the door and said, “Yes, sir?”
“What’s
the name of the astronomer that helps us out now and then?”
“Hang
on a minute and I’ll get the number for you.”
As
Burroughs left, Lanning turned away from the computer screen. “Unless you have
something, I can’t see any significance in these, even with your ninety minute
difference.”
“Something
has gotten the head shed’s panties in a bunch. I don’t know what it could be.”
Lanning
was no longer interested. He said, “Unless you can impress me quickly, I’m
going home. It’s late and I’m tired.
He
moved to the door, stepped back to let Burroughs through. “I’ll see you guys in
the morning,” he said, “unless, of course, something happens.”
Burroughs
looked at his tablet and said, “Name you are looking for is Dawson. Ralph
Dawson. He’s at the local university.”
“Why
don’t you give him a call?”
“Now,
sir? It’s ten thirty.”
Wilson
looked at his watch to confirm the time and tapped his pencil against the empty
Coke bottle. “Yeah, now. Give him a call.”
Ralph
Dawson, who looked as if he had been sent over from central casting in the role
of the eccentric college professor in an old, torn sweater and long hair that
rarely saw a comb, walked in, escorted by a security policeman. He asked, “What
is so important that you couldn’t wait until a decent hour to call?”
Wilson
walked toward the door and then said to the security policeman, “Thank you.
I’ll take over here.” He then turned to Dawson and said, “Thank you for coming
in so late, Doctor. Would you like a beverage? Coke? Coffee? Water?”
“No,
thank you. Well, yes, come to think of it, a bottle of water would be welcome.”
Once
Dawson had his water, Wilson said, “Doctor, I hope that I didn’t get you out
here on a wild goose chase. I’d like you to take a quick look at some of the
data we’ve assembled and give us your impression.”
Dawson
took the tablet from Burroughs, saw the security markings on it and asked, “Am
I supposed to see this?”
“Nothing
there that would impact national security. You might say that that is our
non-security security tablet.”
Dawson
took it and began to read. He frowned once or twice and then pulled out his
smart phone, making a few calculations on it.
Wilson
almost said something about that, but realized any data that Dawson had copied
would probably be in the news in the next few days. He got up and leaving
Burroughs to watch Dawson, he left his office and went to the coffee pot. It
was empty. He then walked down the hall to the water cooler. He got a drink of
the water tepid water and then stepped outside the building. Overhead he could
see thousands of stars. The massive lights of the parking lot had been turned
out after ten to conserve energy, as were many of the other lights on the base.
Wilson was always amazed by the sight. So many stars.
He
walked back into the building and into the office. Dawson had finished looking
at the reports and was now working on his smart phone. He saw Wilson and said,
“There is a rather interesting relationship here.”
Wilson
didn’t want to contaminate Dawson’s theories with his own. Instead he said, “I
hadn’t noticed anything too significant.”
“I’m
not sure significant is the right word. The big clue is the time difference in
some of these sightings. The ninety minutes is interesting.”
Then,
falling into his professor mode, Dawson removed his glasses and massaged the
bridge of his nose. Without looked at Wilson, he said, “We have, or course,
calculated the orbits for our satellites and those we plan to launch in the
next couple of years. Most are based on an altitude of above a hundred fifty
miles, with the speed dictated by the altitude. These data seem to fit in with
what you have given me here. Adding it together, I would say that what was seen
was something in orbit.”
“Doctor,
are you familiar with the statement that the true test of a man’s intelligence
is how much he agrees with you?”
“Certainly.”
“I
mention this only because you have confirmed what I had thought. I noticed that
ninety minute discrepancy as well.”
“If
it is in orbit, then its path is predictable. You should be able to figure out
where it will reappear.”
Wilson
began to understand why someone had been pushing for investigation. Someone
else had figured it out as well, though Wilson didn’t understand why they had
ordered him out. It was something that should have been investigated at a much
higher level.
“For
my predictions to be accurate, I would like additional information.”
“But
you can do it now?”
“We
really don’t have enough information for any prediction to be accurate. If
someone reports something tonight, then we’ll have something. I can make some
educated guesses.”
Wilson
walked to the window and looked up at all the stars burning holes in the sky.
He said, “Tomorrow I’ll see if any of our recent reports fit into the pattern.
I’ll call in a few days.” He turned slowly and looked at Dawson.
Dawson
seemed to realize what was happening, what was being said. “You mean this
doesn’t belong to us?”
“Not
to my knowledge. In fact, I don’t know who it belongs to. Anyone who launched
it would probably be celebrating their achievement.”
“What
are you saying? That this comes from, what? Outer space? That we’re dealing
with space aliens here?”
Wilson
grinned and said, “Well, that seems to be one possibility.”
“You
simply don’t have enough data to make such a suggestion. There is nothing I’ve
seen to suggest that this isn’t something we’ve launched.”
Wilson
was quiet for a moment and then said, “Before I called you, I took a look at
the orbits of our satellites, and when I say our, I’m talking about everything
that has been launched from this planet. There is nothing in orbit that would
have put it over that location at that time and have been visible to either the
pilots or those on the ground.”
Dawson
studied his notes for a moment and then repeated. “You don’t have enough data
to make such a leap. The most logical conclusion is that this is something that
was just recently launched into orbit.”
“I
have computer access to a wide range of data bases,” said Wilson. “I have run a
preliminary scan and found nothing. Tomorrow I’ll put my geeks on it and see if
there are any reports that fit into a pattern that would have brought a
satellite into view at the times and locations that we have.”
“Then
why did you ask me here so late?”
Wilson
laughed. “Because I needed some confirmation of the theory and you came to the
same conclusion that I did. Now I can look a little deeper.
Dawson
forced himself up, out of the chair, groaning with age. “Then I’ll be going.”
“How
much data did you download to your phone?”
Unconsciously
Dawson looked at his phone. “If you want me to go further with this, I’ll need
the data.”
Wilson
hesitated. “It’s all classified fairly high.”
“But
I already know about it. I can only make accurate predictions if I have
accurate information.”
Still
Wilson hesitated. Dawson was right, of course. Wilson took a deep breath and
said, “I have to warn you, Doctor, that the material is classified. If the news
feeds get this, we’ll both be hung out to dry.”
“I
know how to keep my mouth shut, Captain. I have signed the appropriate
documents when I took over the consulting duties. You have nothing to worry about
from me.”
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